Thursday 23 April 2020

Thursday 23rd April 2020 - SPaG

Today Idriss and I have been practicing our writing, but we have forgotten to add commas (,) to our sentences. Please help us by rewriting the sentences below with commas in the right places.


  1. Anna had visited America Finland France and Spain.
  2. Silently Marvin crept down the long winding staircase.
  3. Kyle and his friends play golf tennis football and cricket at the weekend.
  4. Mario bought sandwiches muffins crisps and fruit for lunch.
  5. Suddenly the man remembered his kind caring sister was coming.
  6. Fay went to the beach the zoo and the river last year.
  7. Sharks which have sharp teeth live in the sea.
  8. The baby who was tired and hungry screamed all night.

Thanks for your help! 😎



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5 comments:

  1. Unknown23 April 2020 at 11:42


    Anna had visited America ,Finland ,France and Spain.

    Silently Marvin crept down the long ,winding staircase.

    Kyle and his friends play golf, tennis, football and cricket at the weekend.

    Mario bought sandwiches, muffins, crisps and fruit for lunch.

    Suddenly the man remembered his kind ,caring sister was coming.

    Fay went to the beach ,zoo and the

    river last year.
    Sharks which have sharp teeth live in the sea.
    amiee
    The baby who was tired and hungry screamed all night.

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  2. Shanel23 April 2020 at 11:48

    1. Anna had visited America, Finland, France and Spain.
    2. Silently Marvin crept down the long, winding, staircase.
    3.Kyle and his friends play golf, tennis, football and cricket at the weekends.
    4.Mario bought sandwiches, muffins, crisps and fruit for lunch.
    5.Suddenly the man remembered his kind, caring sister was coming.
    6.Fay went to the beach , the zoo and the river last year.
    7.Sharks, which have sharp teeth live in the sea.
    8. The baby, who was tired and hungry screamed all night.

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  3. lanilde23 April 2020 at 23:42

    1) Anna, visited America,Finland,France and Spain.

    2) Silently Marvin, down the long winding staircase.

    3) Kyle and his friends play golf,tennis,football and cricket.

    4) Mario bought sandwiches,muffins,crisps and fruits.

    5) Suddenly the man remembered, his kind caring sister was coming.

    6) Fay went to the beach,the zoo and the river last year.

    7) Sharks which have sharp teeth, live in the sea.

    8) The baby who was tired and hungry, who screamed all night.

















































































































































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  4. Navaya-Sky27 April 2020 at 13:36

    Anna had visited America, Finland, France and Spain.

    Silently, Marvin crept down the long winding staircase.

    Kyle and his friends play golf, tennis, football and cricket at the weekend.

    Mario bought sandwiches, muffins, crisps and fruit for lunch.

    Suddenly, the man remembered his kind, caring sister was coming.

    Fay went to the beach, the zoo and the river last year.

    Sharks which have sharp teeth, live in the sea.

    The baby who was tired and hungry, screamed all night.

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  5. Mr McKenzie28 April 2020 at 18:40

    The answers are below. Well done Year 3!

    1) Anna visited America, Finland, France and Spain.

    2) Silently, Marvin crept down the long winding staircase.

    3) Kyle and his friends play golf,tennis,football and cricket.

    4) Mario bought sandwiches, muffins, crisps and fruits.

    5) Suddenly the man remembered, his kind caring sister was coming.

    6) Fay went to the beach,the zoo and the river last year.

    7) Sharks, which have sharp teeth, live in the sea.

    8) The baby, who was tired and hungry, screamed all night.

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