Night times are getting really boring at my house as we have read all the books! Can you help me by writing stories for me to read to my children.
I will let Idriss pick his favourite, then I will record myself reading it to him and post it on the blog.
Then last day to enter is Wednesday 8th April.
If you need inspiration, here is an image that you can create a story about.
I can't wait to read your stories to my children!
Once in the bright, blue sea splashing into the sands,there were two lovely children's called Tom and Mary who was lost in the sea.
ReplyDeleteSuprisingly, they found a long path which had stairs and that goes up to the colorful sky.
"Lets go up the path!" Mary said curiously.But Tom didn't agree with Mary because he thought that they would go to a new world but Mary didn't care about what he said. Tom was really sad because Mary didn't care about him. Sadly Tom went and sat down in the sea until midnight waiting for Mary to come.
The next day Tom was really worried about Mary and shouted MARY WERE ARE YOU! Suddenly Tom went up the path bravely. Unfortunatly Tom saw Mary tied up in a rope and Tom amazingly rescued Mary.
The next few hours Tom and Mary escaped from that dangerous place and would never go back there ever again. "I guess you was right Tom, it was really dangerous Tom I should believe you, I'm really sorry. It's okay I really appreciate you sorry. Lets go and find a shed Tom said so they lived happily ever after. THE END.. Shanel
Thank you for your story, I am looking forward to reading it to my son tonight!
ReplyDeleteOnce apon a time there was a knight the knight was called Idrris and there was a princess called Nabeelah. One day Nabeelah was walking through the town thats when Nabeelah saw a knight all of a sudden Nabeelah had tripped and was bleeding so Idrris went to Nabeelah and helped Nabeelah and Nabeelah said.
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And so Idrris took Nabeelah to Norwich Castle and wiped the blood off her knees and took the princess to the castle and so Nabeelah said.
"Would you like to live with me?"
And so the knight said.
"Yes!"
So they lived happily ever after!
THE END!
Ounce upon a time there was a boy not just a boy an amazing , incredible boy he was 5 years old and his name was Idress and when he was at school he got An A in his test .people were very jealous of him,but his dad Mr McKenzie said be a brave boy because he was sceard of the dark , but now he is a brave boy .So he fell asleep .Sudenly he heard a noise it was strange so he hid under his covers. When it was morning Idress became stronger and healthier because he ate all his fruit and vegetables.
ReplyDeleteJust then, he became a hero and everyone loved him because he saved the world and they all lived happily ever after.
Thee end
I hope you like this Idriss and Mr McKenzie.
Once upon a time there was a rabbit called peter rabbit and he was famous for the work he has finished but one day he ran out of carrots so he went to Mr fox farm then Mr fox started chasing peter but peter faster then a cheetah he could jump high than a grass hopper and he ran back to his tree house. Lucky he was able to get 22 carrots and he fed every one in the village and his friends.
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