Thursday 9 April 2020

Story feedback from Idriss!

Last week I set a challenge to write a short story that I could read to my children.

Thank you to Shanel, Lanilde and Navaya for your stories. We all enjoyed them very much.

I have recorded Idriss' comments and read his favourite story as promised. If you listen carefully, you can hear Nabeelah trying to give her opinion in the background!

Shanel's story comments

Lanilde's story comments

Navaya's story and comments



You are all brilliant! I look forward to more stories to read to my family.
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6 comments:

  1. Navaya-Sky9 April 2020 at 14:14

    This made me really happy Mr McKenzie thank you for reading it to him

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    1. Mr McKenzie14 April 2020 at 08:58

      Thank you for writing such a fun story!

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  2. Lanilde10 April 2020 at 16:39

    Thanks for the comment Idriss.

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    1. Mr McKenzie14 April 2020 at 08:59

      Idriss says "I like your stories."

      We really enjoyed your writing Lanilde

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  3. Shanel13 April 2020 at 14:59

    Thank you for reading my story to your childrens
    sorry I didn't know we had homework in the holidays and Happy Easter.

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    1. Mr McKenzie14 April 2020 at 09:01

      Hi Shanel, Thank you for writing a story for us!

      Happy Easter!

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