Idriss has decided that he wants to start his own business. He is going to sell toys that he makes to YouTubers! As a supportive dad, I have suggested that he make a poster using persuasive language to hook his customers.
Persuasive language tries make the reader do something. Which phrases below do you think are persuasive to the reader?
Help me to help Idriss launch his new business idea!
1 the moon orbits the earth
ReplyDelete2 cut along the dotted line
3 snow closes local schools
4 whilst stocks last
5 for a limited of times
I think your last two choices (4 & 5) are great examples of persuasive language.
DeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteThese phrases should help Idriss launch his toy shop.
20 % off! Whilst stocks last.
For a limited time only.
This roaring, red, racing car is the must have toy of the year.
Smart people choose smart prices.
Super work, Freya. Maybe you should be the launch manager for Idriss' new top shop!
DeleteThe phrases are:
ReplyDelete1. 20% off!Whilst stocks last.
2. Smart people choose smart prices!
3. Cool trainers,designed for cool kids!
4. For a limited time only!
5. This roaring,red,racing car is the must have toy of the year.