This will be written in the third person.
Can you write sentences in all the first, second and third person?
Our focus for the whole piece is to see an increasing range of sentence structures being used.
Look at the narrative below.
What do you notice about the writing?
Look at the way the sentences are opened and structured.
What would you advise the writer to do?
Now read this second narrative.
Are the sentences started in a similar way?
How is the boy mentioned?
How is the monster mentioned?
Today I want you to attempt a short setting paragraph and a second paragraph containing
an action sequence.
Focus on the use of preposition phrases and a variety of sentence openers.
Send you work to debeauvoirprimaryschool@gmail.com.
It was a dark warm night. An owl hooted and crickets chirped. On a blue lake appeared a yellow eye, green and white skin. And a small shaped ear, and moonlight reflected on the water.
ReplyDeleteA short pathway led to a camping area, and fire crackled with embers and red ash rising upwards into the sky. A log was used as a bench and a little boy toasting a marshmallow, the creature sneaked behind the little boy as a mouse but the creature made a creepy sound. The little boy was scared and pointed the stick on the monster but it didn’t do anything. The kind boy gave him a marshmallow then more and more but there was no more left. The boy was so that he could be eaten by that monster.
Hi Mr Mackenzie
ReplyDeleteHere is Lanilde's mum. I would like to apologise for why Lanilde work on the blog have been sent late, because our internet at home it's not working well during of the day and we are having problem with the laptop.
Your sincerely
Antonio
Yes.
ReplyDeleteWe all like helping each other because it is kind and cheerful.
You have a good heart and a good teacher.
She is smart because she is always concentrating on her work.
2) It was written in the third person.
3) Yes. Because is written in the third person.
4) In the third person.
5) In the third person.
I am going to write about Power Rangers Beast Mophers
In Beast Mophers there is 2 boys and a girl which fight the super villans to save the World because they are terrible, wicked and harmless .
The villans always try to defeat the Ninja's by using their power, robots to destroy them. But the Ninja's always fight together as a team and they are very good using swords, good in Karate like punching, kicking and jumping scaring the enemies so they can defend, protect themselves and always win the battle and the villans lose and they become angry.